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Saturday, August 13, 2011
How is my narrative essay going so far?
Where's your Thesis statement? Also I'm not sure where your paragraphs start. Remember each paragraph should have an idea. sounds good though. Thesaurus words can be found on your Word or you can go to Websterdictionary.com
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